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Reviewer: Hazmat (Signed)
15/04/10 - 06:23 pm
Incredible story!  Very intense and moving!  I really enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: Quadrantje (Anonymous)
10/06/08 - 09:10 pm

I love the idea for this one, but the story itself feels a bit rushed. I wish you would have gone a bit slower about it. But still, it's beautiful.
ME

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Reviewer: Vanessa (Vanynessa on Vamb) (Anonymous)
06/02/08 - 11:59 pm
Wow, this was just a beautiful story!!  It started out so sad (which pulled me in from the beginning), but I adored the warm and fuzzy ending.  Wonderful job!!
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Reviewer: quantumsilver (Signed)
03/02/08 - 01:06 am

FREAKING...AWESOME! That was seriously one of the best things I've read in the longest time...serious, heart-wrenching...and a happy ending, too. Fantastic and so well written I was enthralled. Wow, you're talented. LOVED it!

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Reviewer: canadianfolk (Signed)
01/02/08 - 08:54 pm

:) Love it! I was initially horrified at C/7, but since I know you like happy J/C endings, I persevered ;)

You portrayed the difficulty of getting over a miscarriage very realistically. The vulnerability and need to protect that leads to non- or mis-communication can damage and even destroy relationships. I am so glad they recovered, and that they did it together!

 

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Reviewer: cuteasboo (Anonymous)
01/02/08 - 04:52 pm

That was a lovely story!

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Reviewer: Rachel Cann (Anonymous)
01/02/08 - 07:33 am
Wonderful story, I must admit I was hoping for a twist where the baby ended up being theirs in every sense, but I guess I'll settle for this:)
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Reviewer: Cheshire (Signed)
31/01/08 - 05:20 pm

Oh, so good.  I love a feisty Phoebe and anytime Janeway and B'Elanna plot together, good things will happen for Chakotay.  You handled a difficult subject with excellent care!  Thank you for sharing! 

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