I love the idea for this one, but the story itself feels a bit rushed. I wish you would have gone a bit slower about it. But still, it's beautiful.
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FREAKING...AWESOME! That was seriously one of the best things I've read in the longest time...serious, heart-wrenching...and a happy ending, too. Fantastic and so well written I was enthralled. Wow, you're talented. LOVED it!
:) Love it! I was initially horrified at C/7, but since I know you like happy J/C endings, I persevered ;)
You portrayed the difficulty of getting over a miscarriage very realistically. The vulnerability and need to protect that leads to non- or mis-communication can damage and even destroy relationships. I am so glad they recovered, and that they did it together!
That was a lovely story!
Oh, so good. I love a feisty Phoebe and anytime Janeway and B'Elanna plot together, good things will happen for Chakotay. You handled a difficult subject with excellent care! Thank you for sharing!