I too love introspection. I think it's realistic for everyone to have low moments, and still basically be a strong person, as you say. A healthy response to an unhealthy situation, as it were. Thank you for your comments!
"She'd cried more in the past month than in the previous seven years. It was terrifying, but liberating as well." I really, really loved this line. That summed up the entire experience, both in the DQ and upon returning home, in just two short lines.
Dearly loved this. You have talent, without question. A very well-rounded story with details that just made this come alive and resonate. And I'm sorry if that sounded flat. It was meant to be a glowing review, and I can't wait to read more from you. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words! I appreciate your vote of confidence! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I'm glad you liked the premise. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)
I'm glad you enjoyed this story. Thank you!