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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
23/03/12 - 11:14 pm
Excellent and HOT.  thanks.
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Reviewer: Phyllis Alesia (Anonymous)
11/08/10 - 03:12 am

I love this phrasing; it sets up the scene to come perfectly:

Maybe it’s the wine, maybe it’s the dress, maybe it’s the euphoria of being home, or maybe it’s just about damn time.

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Reviewer: kelmin (Signed)
29/04/09 - 11:29 pm

Oh, glorious fun!  Wish I had the nerve to do NC-17.  Thanks for sharing.

KEL



Author's Response: Thanks Kel! You know, I'm not a very brave NC-17 person either, and is still kinda shocked that I managed to write it! Probably because it's hardly any naughty descriptive stuff in it!:D
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Reviewer: Hazmat (Signed)
24/02/09 - 07:45 pm
Brilliant!  Absolutely perfect!  I really enjoyed it!  Wonderful!

Author's Response: Thank you!
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Reviewer: Andrea (Anonymous)
19/02/09 - 06:28 pm
great story. cant help but think there should be continuations.

Author's Response: Lol... You're not the only one who's mentioned that! Maybe I'll get to it. Just have to wait for the plot bunnies to attack!;) Thanks for the wonderful review!
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Reviewer: Clara (Anonymous)
27/11/08 - 07:30 am

Better than the last one I read as I did finish it.  I can't really see them doing that, but it was entertaining nonetheless.  Please, oh please, do not write in the present tense!!! (OK, one of my pet peeves!) There's a lot of "ands" in it, more commas and less ands would make it flow better.

 

It was a pleasant read anyhow.



Author's Response:

Lol... I'm glad you though I did better with this one.

The plot: Maybe they would, maybe they wouldn't. But wouldn't it be fantastic if they did!:D

Present tense: I think we'll just have to agree to disagree. I know that a lot of people don't like to read it, but I find it to be a challenge and a joy to write so will keep at it, I'm afraid. When I get around to uploading 'A chance meeting', be warned: It's present tense!!!:D

As for the commas and ands, will see what I can do about that in upcoming fics!

 

Thanks for the review!

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Reviewer: mab13j@aol.com (Anonymous)
24/11/08 - 04:28 am

Meg!

I just got to read this:  what a great story.  I think you should post it on FF, even if you do rate it M.  Everyone who has you on their "author alert" list and isn't on VAMB will get a chance to read it.

The election was great, I thought.  Such a big deal for our country...  Now if Obama can only manage to do 1/3 of what he promises...  It's nice to have someone I can feel excited about and proud of!

Have you had a chance to read "Left Behind"  (the A/U "Resolutions" fic I mentioned) by Aislinn Carter?  As I said, it's unfinished, but the last part loses its power anyway.  I think you'll like it:  it's written in the style of "Dying" and "Winter's Child."

Hope your finals are going well.  And when they are over, I hope there's another story coming.

Margaret



Author's Response:

Hi Margaret!

I only now figured out that you can actually respond to the reviews! Lol... I'm happy you liked the story. Will think about posting it on ff.net!:)

Yay for the election! 

I went and looked for "Left behind" and turns out I have already read it, I'd just forgotten the title. What a rollercoaster! I hope she finishes!

Finals coming up in three weeks. I could cry!!! It's too easy to keep procrastinating by writing J/C! Somehow, I don't think I'll pass production animals by writing a post-Endgame fixer upper! Lol...

 

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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
03/11/08 - 09:05 pm

I have a word for this story in my vocabulary somewhere-

Ahh yes here it is---------- BRILLIANT!------------



Author's Response: Thank you! That's very sweet of you to say! I would have replied earlier, but I'm a techno virgin and couldn't figure out how to respond to reviews untill now. Lol...
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Reviewer: canadianfolk (Signed)
02/11/08 - 10:22 pm

Welcome to Pathfinder!

This story has some great visuals, and some great descriptions. Delicious! Well done!



Author's Response: Thanks CF!:)
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