Reviews For A Cry Inside

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Reviewer: Hazmat (Signed)
03/03/09 - 02:11 pm
Intense chapter!  Wow!  I really enjoyed it!  I hope that Kashyk doesn't suceed in his plan, whatever it is!
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Reviewer: Hazmat (Signed)
03/03/09 - 01:45 pm
Amazing chapter!  Very intense!  I really enjoyed it!  The emotion thing was brilliant!  I'm glad that he managed to stop her from commiting cold-blooded murder!
Chapter 5
Reviewer: Hazmat (Signed)
03/03/09 - 01:11 pm
Amazing chapter!  Wow!  I really enjoyed it!  I loved the ending!  Perfect!
Chapter 4
Reviewer: Hazmat (Signed)
03/03/09 - 11:31 am
Amazing chapter!  I'm glad that the Doctor was able to get to Kathryn and retrieve her!  It looks like they'l have some help soon!  The ending was totally Kathryn!
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Reviewer: Hazmat (Signed)
03/03/09 - 10:58 am
Wow!  Very intense!  Why is Chakotay able to feel Kathryn's emotions?  Very intriguing!  I really enjoyed it!
Chapter 2
Reviewer: Hazmat (Signed)
03/03/09 - 10:33 am
Very intense!  I really enjoyed it!  I hope that the doctor can beam her out before Kashyk can hurt her!  The stuff with Harry and Tom was perfect!
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Reviewer: Andrea (Anonymous)
24/02/09 - 01:12 pm
Beautiful story, wish it didnt have to end. thanks for sharing.
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Reviewer: Lita (Signed)
13/11/08 - 02:52 am
This story is absolutely fantastic. Both of you have really outdone yourselves in writing. Not to put any of your other stories to shame since they are brilliant but I would believe this is your best. Although I shouldn't be so surprised when two wonderful writers collaborate :)

I don't believe I've ever had my emotions as strongly invoked as they were from reading this. Every chapter is excellent, but there were two scenes in particular which I simply adored. The first was the entire KJ rescues C scene from when KJ entered that room to when they were beamed up (can you hit him enough with that rifle? lol). The second was the final scene in the corridor from the turbolift where C catches KJ to stop her to where KJ wipes the smug look off K's face. There were also other small moments I enjoyed; KJ rescuing the four in the cargo bay. KJ releasing gas into the area and letting K believe she's killing him, all with the simple use of her favourite word, 'fine' ;)

The only problem I have with the story is neither of you told me it existed :P *pokes*
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Reviewer: Jen Sherman (Anonymous)
09/11/08 - 01:51 pm
That was a fantastic story.  It took me two days to read it as i had to read it in stages as i had to work. it was so well written, the depth of the feelings were amazing.  You really captured Kathryns emotions so well.  you wrote Chakotay beautifuly as well, he was caring and patient, i absoulty loved it.
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Reviewer: yuna (Anonymous)
06/11/08 - 05:43 pm
GREAT STORY! I just couldn't stop reading it! You shouold do a story similar about Janeway, Chakotay and the Kazon take over in the eppisode Basics. I've always wanted a A/U story about Basics. You be an excellent writer to do so!
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Reviewer: ibagoalie (Anonymous)
02/11/08 - 07:31 am

AWESOME!!!  Thanks for wrapping up a fabulous, angst filled story.  You all did it with reverence and if I was the original author, I'd be very, very pleased (I hope she is/was)

 

 

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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
26/10/08 - 12:26 am
This is really awsome, you do really good work! I love your characterizations and your writting style, and you made the POV switch work here which is very hard to do well. Bravo!
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Reviewer: kchemlab@aol.com (Anonymous)
23/10/08 - 06:57 pm
Brilliant! I couldn't stop reading this.
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